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UNIT 1. Pre-writing: Getting ready to write. 

18/09/2023

Page 5 - Exercise 1 a) festivals: music festivals, popular musicians in festivals, best songs in festivals.

c) my country: Spanish typical food, Spanish desserts, Spanish paella. 

e) cars: mass production of hybrid cars, importance of hybrid cars, contribution to environment.

Page 6 -  Exercise 2 a) teenage fashions: emo style, clean make-up, wearing all star converse, hand-made bags, acrylic nails, baggy jeans, eyeliner.

Page 8 - Exercise 5  Topic: hanging out with friends

Places to go: cinema, amusement park, city centre, shopping centre.

Chatting about: series, films, music, artists, concerts, sports.

Style: baggy jeans, T-shirt, sandals, trousers, boots.

Means of transport: car, bus, train, taxi.

Page 9 - Exercise 6  Edit exercise 5 on page 8.

When hanging out with friends is paramount knowing where to go and how, I am keeping the list places to go and means of transport. What's more, I am choosing the most relevant ones from each list for instance, places to go: cinema and shopping centre & means of transport: car and bus.

Page 10 - Exercise 7 1. narrow  2. brief  3. brainstorming  4. list  5. mapping  6. relevant  7. freewriting   8. fluency 9. accuracy

UNIT 2. The structure of a Paragraph.

25/09/2023

Group 2

A) too general B) too specific C) too specific D) correct

Topic: lunar and solar events

Controlling idea: different ways in which ancient people observed and recorded them.


Group 3

A) correct B) too specific C) too specific D) incomplete E) too general 

Topic: food safety
Controlling idea: knowing which type of foods are safe

Group 4

A) incomplete B) too general C) too specific D) correct

Topic: popularity of new hybrid automobiles
Controlling idea: taking advantage of sending less money 

Paragraph 1

A) too general B) too specific C) too specific D) too specific E) too specific F) Correct G) too specific 

Topic: personal digital assistants
Controlling idea: tools for basic tasks as well as for multimedia functions.

Paragraph 2

A) too specific B) too specific C) Correct D) example E) too specific F) too specific

Topic: number of Nations competing in the Space Race

Controlling idea: it is increasing the number.


2. Types of paragraphs

TOPIC     CONTROLLING IDEA

1. Driving on freeways requires skill and alertness.

2. The Caribbean island of Trinidad attracts tourists because of its calypso music.

3. Spectacular beaches make Puerto Rico a tourist Paradise.

4. Moving away from home can be a stressful experience for people.

5. Many religious rules arose from the health needs of ancient times.

6. A major problem for many students is the high cost of books.

7. Owning a car is a necessity for me.

8. It is an expensive luxury to own a car in a large city.


- Writing TS for paragraphs. 


Paragraph 1
The daily use of words from other languages to the English language is increasing nowadays. 

Paragraph 2
European and American univerisities have a different way of organizing their educative system.

Paragraph B
Example: in Virginia a five-month-long suvery at five busy intersections
Statistic: 900 people die, 200,000 injured
Quotation: according to the instaurance Institute for Highway Safety, `Communities (...) red lights´.

Homework unit 2
Page 11 - 1 a) The topic of is visiting Switzerland. b) The main idea is the large variety of cultures and languages. 
c) Suggesting this place as a place for a holiday and its geographical features.
Page 13 - 2 Topic: Visit Switzerland. Supporting sentences: it has many mountains, shares its borders and four official languages. Concluding sentence: places and things to see definitely make Switzerland a great place for a holiday. 
3. a) too personal b) correct, it has a TS, CI, SS, CS c) too simple and general.


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TOPIC     MAIN IDEA

a) Switzerland is a very interesting country to visit.

b) Dogs make excellent pets.

c) A really good place to study is the library at my school.

d) Learning a foreign language creates job opportunities.

e) Football is my favourite sport because it is exciting to watch.

f) One of the most valuable tools for students is the computer.

g) My sister and I have very different personalities.

h) Summer is the best time to travel in my country.

i) My hometown is a friendly place to live.


5 - a) 3 - I admire my friend Ken because he doesn't give up.
b) 2 - There are many popular sports in my country, but the most popular sport is football.
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b) a grandparent
Families are formed with a large number of people, but grandmothers establish a special connection with all of them.
d) a favorite food to eat
Eating is a must in our daily routine and if we eat our favorite food, the day be easier.
e) playing a musical instrument.
There are several ways of enjoying music, playing a musical instrument is a full-time passion.

UNIT 3. The development of a Paragraph.

25/09/2023

Page 17 - 2 TS: You'll love working out at the Atlas Health Centre, and you'll love what it does for you!

a) State-of-the-art equipment

b) air conditioning rooms

c) staff nutrition experts

d) relax in a sauna

e) aerobics

f) swimming class

Page 18 - 3 a) Solving problems as soon as possible. b) yes

4 - TS: Even when a first date is a disaster, a couple can still become good friends.

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Page 19 - 8 Exercise 3) Topic sentence: This simple sentence reminds me to take care of small problems before they become big problems. - Restate the main idea.

Exercise 4) Topic sentence: now that Greg and I are good friends, we can look back and laugh at how terrible that first date was! - sum up the information in the paragraph.

9 - a) Means of support: an explanation based on a research about the importance of getting enough sleep.
Concluding sentence? Yes/no 

b) Means of support: an example of a personal like.
Concluding sentence? Yes/no Thanks to psychology research one day it would be easier understanding how humans think.

c) Means of support: an example of a personal experience.
Concluding sentence? Yes/no 

d) Means of support:  developed with details.

Concluding sentence? Yes/no 

e) Means of support: an explanation about true friendships. Concluding sentence? Yes/no After all, what true matter is respecting each other to ensure a friendship.


UNIT 4. Descriptive and Process Paragraphs.

02/10/2023

Write a descriptive paragraph about place.

TITLE: In the profundities.


In the deepest of an enchanted dark cave, there are four fearless warriors who are carrying different types of weapons. We can see thanks to the only light provided by huge blue mushrooms. It definitely seems to be a never seen before landscape judging by the unique features, for instance the brilliant minerals that are seen in the left corner of the picture. In the foreseeable future, the lightning mushroom could have a negative impact on the adventurous explorers. However, they seem to be prepared to defend not only themselves, but also each other if it is necessary. Moreover, they are wearing dark and tight leather clothes which perfectly fit as if it was a second skin. There can be no doubt that in this magical place there is more than meets the eye.


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Prepositions: on a small side, on the other side, at a small table, in the corner, on the walls, at the pretty green plants, in my favourite café.


05/10/2023

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1. Cook the rice, 2. cut vegetables, 3. heat the oil, 4. chilli sauce, 5. add vegetables, 6. chopped tomatoes, 7. spring onions.

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a) First b) Before c) After d) Then e) While f) Next g) Finally

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a) 2   b) 4   c) 6  d) 5  e) 3  f) 7 g) 1


Process paragraph:  How to achieve good grades.

If you want to succeed in getting good grades, you need to follow this step-by-step list. First, organization is a key point, so try to write down your homework and different tasks in an agenda. Second, write important dates in a calendar. Next, you should create a weekly timetable and a to-do list for every evening. Then, you have to study on a regular basis in order to avoid unnecessary stress. Finally, you have to be constant and determined. Now you are ready to start achieving good grades.


UNIT 5. Opinion Paragraphs.

09/10/2023

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a) The main idea is riding bicycles.
b) The writer's purpose is persuade people to use them.
c) Car traffic in town is terrible, cycling is good exercise.
d) The fact is used in order to support his own opinion.

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a) Opinion b) Opinion c) Fact d)  Fact e) Opinion f) Fact g) Opinion h) Opinion

5 - Fact: The country is experiencing an economic downturn.
Internet has improved over the years.
Hybrid cars release less carbon dioxide.
Opinion: Studying English is a great option.
Romeo and Juliet is the best romance book ever.
Car traffic is stressful.

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a) should b) can't c) must d) could e) should f) ought to

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a) so b) because c) since d) so e) since f) therefore


Write an opinion paragraph about unconditional basic income.

In today’s society, there is a part of the population who is receiving unconditional basic income. This economic aid should be more regularised and only given to those who truly need it. Otherwise, people will think there is no use working hard if they are going to receive money staying at home. This is a serious problem because the ones who are working are paying to unemployed people. The wealth of a country is based on what workers produce, but if the number of them is reduced, the country will suffer an economic downturn. There is no doubt that a balance has to be reached. In conclusion, the government should encourage people to work instead of giving a wide range of facilities.

UNIT 6. Comparison/Contrast Paragraphs.

16/10/2023

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a) Living with a host family and living in a shared flat.
b) Mostly contrasting because of the linkers used. Ex: but, another difference.

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a) similar to b) similarly c) both ... and  d) as ... as

4 - a) while b) different from c) however d) not as ... as

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Similarities between the sports: hit a ball, both men and women can play, open area, needs skill, outdoors.
Differences between the sports: very expensive(g), fairly cheap (t), a racket (t), a club (g), court with a net (t).

9 - Comparison or contrast paragraph. Point-by-point or block organisation.

SPORTS (point by point organisation)

Although tennis and golf are two sports that are mainly based on hitting a ball, they are completely different from each other. On the one hand, in tennis the ball is hit with a racquet. On the other hand, the ball in golf is hit with a golf club. Regarding the elements required, in tennis, there is a net separating the two opponents. In contrast, golf is a sport which consists in placing the ball inside a hole. As for the money, golf is well-known for its expensiveness. However, tennis is cheaper and more affordable than golf. In conclusion, these sports have more differences than similarities in common.


MUSIC (block organisation)

The musicians in these pictures have different music styles. On the one hand, the boy band seems to be playing a rock song, judging by their looks since they are wearing leather clothes.  The man standing next to the singer is playing the electric guitar, quite famous in terms of rock music. On the other hand, the man who is playing cello may take part in a classical music performance. Due to the rest of the musicians behind him, he is playing in an orchestra. He is wearing very formal clothes such as a shirt and a tie. Although both of them are playing music, there is no doubt that they are different music genres.


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The paragraph discusses advantages of living abroad vs staying in your own country. Block organisation has been used.

UNIT 7. Problem/Solution Paragraphs.

23/10/2023

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The main idea of the first paragraph is deforestation.
The topic sentence is ‘Deforestation is a serious problem because forests and trees (…).’

2 - How is the first paragraph developed? It explains the deforestation issue with scientists quotes.
Which is the main idea? The main idea is deforestation.
What are the supporting ideas? The climate change, floods, animal deaths and scientists quotes.
What solutions does the writer offer? The writers proposes using less paper, cutting down the amount, reusing it and recycling.
Is there a concluding sentence in the second paragraph? Yes, it is ‘ If you follow the three Rs, you can help save the world’s forests.’

3 - Air pollution: problems (global warming, extinction of animals, destruction of the ozone layer) and solutions (avoid using the car, promote public transport, recycle)


Traffic: problems (air pollution, noise pollution, angry drivers) and solutions (public transport, regulate co2 emissions,).


Overcrowded classrooms: problems (less attention, easier distractions, missing information ) and solutions (more professionals, rooms, split into smaller groups)


  • Write a problem/solution paragraph about overcrowded classrooms:


Problems (Me): Overcrowded classrooms are a significant issue in today’s society. This is due to the fact that the number of university students is constantly increasing. As a result, there are not either enough teachers or classrooms to provide efficient education. For this reason, many students find it difficult to pay attention to their teachers, it is easier to get distracted in a room full of people. This issue will have a detrimental effect on future generations.


Solutions (Ángela): One solution to the problem of overcrowded classrooms is to hire more professionals. The number of teachers has to increase as the number of students. A second solution is to split the classroom into smaller groups in order to get further and more specific education.  If these two ideas are taken into consideration, the problem will be successfully solved.


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Conditional sentences: Scientists say that if deforestation continues (...), if you use less paper, fewer trees will be cut for paper making, if you follow the three Rs, you can help save the world's forests.


5 a) don't use // could get  b) will do //don't get  c) want // exercise // don't eat  d) could fly // will be

e) can be // think  f) will go // find.


6 a) I won't go out b) I won't bring the book c) I won't drive by car d) If I get home early e) If you work hard
f) If I don't save enough money

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Linking words: one solution, one answer, a second answer, a final answer.

26/10/2023

Exercise 2 
1 - In the short essay, there is information about the other members of the family.
2 - The topic is Patricio. The controlling ideas is that he is old and interesting.
3 - New information such as the outfit, the height and the physical appearance. 
4 - The topic is Patricio. The controlling ideas is that he has an intriguing history.
5 - New information, for instance, the places he has been to.
6 - There is a summary included in the essay conclusion. 

Exercise 3

A - a) A restaurant job is a convenient choice for a college student for several reasons.
B - Because of that scary experience I learned to be more careful.

UNIT 8. The structure of an Essay.


06/11/2023


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1- Introduction: 1st paragraph

Main body paragraphs: 2nd (2 example-blocks of supporting sentences) and 3rd paragraphs (3 example-blocks of supporting sentences).

Conclusion (4th paragraph) re-statement

Context (1-4 lines): english vocabulary is influenced by other languages.

Thesis statement: (last line of the 1st paragraph) and the topic is the influence of African American Influence.


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2- Thesis statement: African Amercians, too, have both contributed new words to English and changed the meanings of some existing words.


3- A) Topic: British food. Thesis statement: The UK can be divided into different regions that each has its own characteristic foods influenced by the culture of the people who live there. Main idea: different foods are influenced by the culture of the people.

B)Topic: Koalas. Thesis statement: As a result of human population growth, deforestation and hunting, the number of koalas has declined. Main idea: the number of them has declined.


C)Topic: Taoist gardens. Thesis statement: No two Taoist gardens are exactly alike, but all Taoist gardens include four essential elements: water, mountains, buildings and bridges. Main idea: they all include four essential elements.


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  1. F - The top government official in my country is a good prime minister.

  2. N - When taking pictures, digital cameras offer a better quality image.

  3. F - India became an independent country in 1947 benefited its economy a lot.

  4. N - Although there are several disadvantages of owning a car, people still use it.

  5. F - In the past it was easier to own a house, but today is different.

  6. N - 

  7. F - In my country, the most popular musical festival is classical music.


  • Write a thesis statement for each topic:


University exams: In order to pass university exams, it is crucial to take into account two ideas: prepare good notes and study days before the test.

Technology: When taking professional pictures, digital cameras offer a better quality image.

Novels today: Many people say that today’s novels are no longer as interesting as they used to be in the past.

Poetry: In terms of universal poetry, William Shakespeare is the most well-known poet in the world.

God: Although there is no scientific explanation of God's existence, many people believe in him.

Felipe VI: Spanish citizens are convinced that he will do better than his father.  

Eviction: Although most emigrants are in favor of returning to their country, this is not always the cause.

Catalonia: Although there are many people who think it should be an independent country, the great majority of the population is against it.

UNIT 9. Outlining an Essay.

13/11/2023


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A) Thesis statement: Nuclear power is not a good energy source for the world.

B) There will be 3 paragraphs (nuclear fuel is expensive, nuclear materials are not safe and there is a great possibility of accidents).

C) There are 2 supporting points in the 3rd paragraph: nuclear fuels are dangerous and nuclear waste products are dangerous. 

D) There are 8 details: 3 for the first statement, 3 for the second and 2 for the third statement.


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TITLE: The changing vocabulary of English


I. Thesis statement: ‘African Americans have both contributed new words to English and changed the meanings of some existing words’.


II. Words introduced by African Americans

A Ok

1.From an African language.

2. Now used all over the world to mean ‘all right’. 

B Jazz

1.Came from New Orleans.

2. Exact origin unknown.


III. Meaning changes over time.

A Cool

1.Original meaning.

2.New meanings.

B Square

1. Original meaning.

2.New meaning.


IV. Concluding sentence: ‘Existing ethnic groups in the US as well as new immigrants will surely continue to bring new words to English and give fresh meanings to existing words.


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3. Title: The benefits of yoga.

  1. S. I) S

  2. M J) T

  3. S K)S

  4. S L)C

  5. M M)M

  6. S

  7. S

  8. S


4.  OUTLINE


TITLE: The benefits of yoga


I. Thesis statement: ‘Doing yoga regularly can be good for your mind, your body, and your emotions’.


II. Mental benefits

A. Develops clear thinking

B. Improves concentration.

 

III. Physical benefits.

A. Improves blood circulation.

B. Improves digestion.

C. Makes you feel strong and flexible.


IV. Emotional benefits

A.Reduces fear, anger, and worry.

B. Helps you feel calm and peaceful.

C. Develops self-confidence.


V. Concluding sentence: ‘Therefore, to build mental, physical, and emotional health, consider doing yoga’.


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Points B, C and D have to change their order, in other words, the content of C first and then the information about D, finally content of B the last of the three. 


III.Effects on San Francisco today have to be changed with IV.Changes in California in the 1800s.


Eliminate E. Technological development is still important, F.There is no gold mining today and G.Character of San Francisco today.


Get rid of 3.Many fast-food restaurants sell cheap hamburgers.


Erase E.Gold rushes in other countries.


Leave A.Population increased. And get rid of details such as “more than(…)”.


Add more aspects in B.Everything became more expensive.


UNIT 10. Introductions and Conclusions.


20/11/2023


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1- General ideas: Most Americans would probably say that their language comes from England. English vocabulary has also been influenced by other countries and groups of people. Some words are borrowed from other languages. 


Specific ideas (Thesis statement): African Americans, too, have both contributed new words to English and changed the meanings of some existing words. 


2- a) Wrong, it is too general, it has to develop the background and give examples. 

B) Correct

C) Wrong, it doesn’t have a thesis statement. 

D) Wrong, it gives too much information.

E) Wrong, it doesn’t give enough information (content). It doesn’t develop a specific topic and lacks a clear thesis statement.


Example paragraph - Find introduction elements.

  • Lead: Most people don’t choose who they eat dinner with every night.  It is usually whomever a person lives with, or is around as dinner time. There are many fascinating people to spend time with while eating dinner.

  • Bridge: If I were able to choose any three people, dead or alive to eat with, it would take me a while to decide (conditional sentence).

  • Thesis statement: After great consideration I would invite Oprah, my grandma, and President Lincoln.


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6-a) 3, possible paragraphs (P2 convenience and P3 lower prices).

b) 1, possible paragraphs (P2 language, P3 culture and P4 landmarks).

c) 5, possible paragraphs (P2 be self-confident and P3 develop creating).

d) 2, possible paragraphs (P2 independence and P3 higher benefits).

e) 6, possible paragraphs (P2 clean energy and P3 renewable energy).

f) 4, possible paragraphs (P2 fake news and P3 hard to distinguish material from experts and from beginners).


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7- b) Correct answer. It is centered on the topic given in the introduction. It is to understand the points developed in the body.


23/11/2023


5.Conclusion

-Which of the following are generally acceptable in conclusions?

A) A statement showing how your aim has been achieved. YES

B) A discussion of the implications of your research. Go NO

C) Some new information on the topic not mentioned before. NO

D) A short review of the main points of your study YES

E) Some suggestions for further research. YES

F) The limitations of your study. NO

G) Comparison with the result of similar studies. NO

H) A quotation that appears to sum up your work. YES


-Match the extracts from the conclusion below with the acceptable components above.

I) - F

II) - H

III) - E

IV) - C

V) - G

VI) - A


1. Introduction contents

What is normally found in an essay introduction?

I) A definition of any unfamiliar terms in the title. YES - V)

II) Your opinions on the subject of the essay. NO

III) Mention some sources you have read on the topic. YES - IV)

IV) A provocative idea or question to interest the reader.NO

V) Your aim or purpose in writing. YES - III)

VI) The method you adopt to answer the question (or an outline) NO - II)

VII) Some brief background to the topic. YES - I) 

VIII) Any limitations you set yourself. YES - VI) 


3.OPENING SENTENCES

-Write introductory sentences for three of the following titles.

B) In today’s society, there are plenty of technological developments that could help to solve global warming.

C) Currently, developing countries should receive aid from different organizations.

D) Nowadays, developed countries have a more complex urbanization process than the under-developed ones.


UNIT 11. Unity and Coherence.


27/11/2023


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1 - a) Thesis statement: The philosophy of traditional Chinese ,ediciones is not the same as the philosophy of modern medicine, but it is useful for curing many health problems.

B) Topic sentence: Modern medicine focuses on illness. (2nd paragraph )

Chinese medicine has a different philosophy. (3rd paragraph)

C) Supporting ideas: (2nd paragraph) cough, fever,

(3rd paragraph) energies in equal balance, ‘yin’ and ‘yang’.

D) Yes, the essay is unified. The second and third paragraph are related to the thesis statement. In the conclusion, there is a concluding sentence.


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2 - We have to eliminate from “Another Frenchman (…)” to “for teachers of the deaf”.

 

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4 - 1) Instead.  2) In addition. 3) For example. 4) On the contrary. 5) As a result.


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5 - a) It = Barcelona.

B) It = Barcelona.

C) Its = Barrio Gótico.

D) Its = Barcelona.

E) They = people living in Barcelona.

F) There = in Barcelona.

G) This = all the pieces of information.


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6 - Transition: the first, in addition, as a result, another, and, after that.

Pronoun reference: he, it, him

Repetition of keywords: sign language, deaf people, signs.


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7 -  Ho Chi Minh City, in Vietnam, is a fascinating destination for travellers to Southeast Asia. It is located on the Mekong River. In addition, it was once an important trading centre for the French in Southeast Asia. As a result, the influence of French culture can still be felt. Many people, especially the older generations, learned French in school and still can speak it very well. Furthermore, some cafés serve French-style breads and pastries in Ho Chi Minh City. Moreover, expensive hotels and restaurants serve this food. Many of the buildings in the city are built in French style. Although the Vietnamese and the French fought, the last ones eventually left the country. In fact, there are museums and monuments documenting the country’s long - and often bloody- history. If you are looking for a unique city to visit in Southeast Asia, Ho Chi Minh City is an attractive choice.






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